Last week we were asked to write a essey about somerhing we feel strongly about from a list of different things. I chose to write about how the school can be improved, and then I chose to specify it, and write about the food we are served at the school. I'm very happy about how it turned out, and are very happy to shear that I got an A on it. Enjoy.
The way to a healthier mind
Ef New York is a beautiful school, a perfect place to learn English and meet perople from the whole world at the same time. Although our school looks perfect from the outside, there are still things that can be improved on the inside. We can always find things that can be better, but it's hard to decide what should be done first.
One of the things that should be prioritised is the food in the cafeteria. We get a lot of unhealthy food, and desserts for every meal, even for breakfast. A lot of the food is the same everyday, like the pasta and the pizza. A lot of young people easily get board with things, and food is one of the things we need some variation with. America is known for its obese population, and that is not hard to belive when we look at the food people get served at school. Off course we can choose not to take the pizza, drink the soda and eat the ice cream, but it's hard to resist the temptation when it's always there.
In the Tv series 'Jamie's School Dinners' in 2005, Jamie Oliver showed us that it's possible to make good tasting and healthier food, and it did not cost more then the other food. The schools he changed the menu for, noted a big difference when it came to the kids' concentration. A lot of students at EF New York are struggeling with their concentration at school and when they are doing their homework.
Make school a little easier for the students, have more variety in the menu and give us healthier choices.
A great essay Marit. No wonder you got an A.
ReplyDeleteIt's well written and well argued, and I loved you Jamie reference=D
Love your bigsis^^,